Thumbs up,
The pad in the breakdown would be better with an instant attack. As for your vocals, they're mostly pretty good, except I would enunciate a little more. It would sound crisp, like your synth-perc in the breakdown to really pronounce the 'k' in your words. As for melodies, I really, really like them. Very musically sound and well-mixed.
Hey DeepEmbrace, thanks a lot for the review! I have to agree with your review completely. I was going to have an instant attack on the strings when they first appear, and then gradually bring the attack level higher towards when the vocals are about to end and the kick-roll comes in. I also think I should've been much clearer with the vocals, like in the word "flight" you can't hear the t, and in the end of the vocal verse you can't hear the d in "hand". Once again, thanks a lot for reviewing this, I strongly appreciate it. I will keep all of your wonderful suggestions in mind when working on my next production. Later! =)
Hey, cool remix.
I've been listening to the original, and I like the melodies. Good job representing those in your remix. However, two things. First, the kick drum seems to make it clip. I don't know if it actually does, but the kick sounds kind of ugly. Second, I know Whip it as an energetic, punk-electric dance track. The remix is cool, but I'm not sure if making a modern, chillout version captures as much of the energy. But hey, you still did pretty well with the remix; keep at it and try to expand your horizons. :)
Now this is what i call some good criticism! :) you nailed what i was trying to do! thanks a lot for the review! i will take what you said into consideration as well! thanks again!
Sweet Trancecore.
To me the vocals don't always sound synchronized properly, but I understand the difficulty of transposing vocals to a remix, especially if you're going from one tempo to another. As for the synths, it seems a little clichéd, but nonetheless clean-sounding and all. Overall, nice job.
Sounds very quantized.
Not that I'm complaining, I actually like the quantized beat a lot. It does sound kind of repetitive though, and if I were you I might alleviate that with some nuances of effect synths about or some synths between the eighth notes, splotched at various places. It is quite catchy so nine out of ten. Nice work.
Keep it LOUD! :)
I love the energy in this one, and I envy that you can get it so loud without clipping. Heh. Well, I'd say it's both innovative and DJ-friendly. Take care!
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